Spelled Deleted Scene: Welcome to the Dollhouse

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*Spoiler Alert* Do not read these chapters until you have finished reading Spelled.

 

This is a fun scene that took place up in the cloud storage. It was how Hydra originally got her rainbow spectacles back from the giant child, Willhamena. In the end, my editor cut it for time and we trimmed the scene to take place without the giants in about half the time.

The scene opens with Hydra telling our trio exactly where she thinks her glasses are and how they are supposed to get them.

 

ENJOY!  Spelled deleted scenes

SPELLED BONUS CHAPTER: Prince Kato’s POV

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Today Spelled is being released. YAY. To celebrate I thought I would write up a quick alternate beginning chapter from Prince Kato’s perspective.

** Warning: This chapter contains minor spoilers and is best enjoyed after reading at least the first 6 chapters of Spelled.**

 

Prince not-so- Charming

“Rule #3: To win the hand of a maiden fair, one must be well groomed of attire, charming of manner, perform actions of dashing, and always be most complimentary to the lady. Lie if you have to.”

                                                                                                                –Definitive Fairytale Survival Guide for Him

 

 

“My Lord, Kato. Sire. Your frostacularness. If you have but a moment…”

“I will have far more moments if you would get on with it, Bobbledandrophous. What is it?” I paused ratcheting the cinch on the horse’s saddle long enough to look over my shoulder—and way up. The chief advisor, while beloved, was both a figurative and literal pain in my neck since he was by far the most towering of all my beastly Chimera subjects.

Bobbledandrophous shuffled his gargantuan feline paws and chewed on the tip of his left wing.

With a groan I brushed a wave of wayward dark reddish hair out of my eyes so that my glare might hold more weight. “If you have counsel, by all means give it. But I will not be swayed from this journey. Both you and I know that I must bring the girl here. Whatever it takes.”

“Why yes. Yes, the council agreed on this point. It’s just…”

“Just what?” My voice pitched low and coarse like rumbling rocks.

“If this girl is truly the Fire Priestess…”

“For Libraria’s sake, she will be,” I insisted. A fine layer of frost spread on the ground around my cracked basilisk-hide boots, the ice magic flowing through me betrayed the worry I refused to voice.

“Ah, yes, but…” Bobbledandrophous shivered and dropped his head to the ground, stirring up a miniature dust and petal storm amongst the petite daisies. “Surely you can’t mean to greet our deliverer wearing that?”

“And why not? There are no holes in my tunic.” I’d sewn up the last of them myself just that morning. “And my leather breeches are best suited for the hard day and a half ride to Emerald.” True. They were a bit worn, but that was to be expected since they used to my father’s.

“But it’s not proper! Here.” Bobbledandraphous wriggled and squirmed until he created enough space that the tip of his dragonesque tail could sneak around him. One of the spikes held something atrocious—the silk and linen monstrosity of a suit that green witch had left behind as an offering of good will. The outfit she said I should wear when I came calling, but surely she had been making a jest at my expense. “Could you not tamp down your pride to mere embers and at least take it with you. She was most insistent.”

“No. And I thought I put that in the burn pile.” The suit had more frills and shiny bits than my mother had worn when she was alive.

“Ah, yes. You did.” My chief council coughed to hide what looked like a smile. “But this note appeared.”

As if on cue, a charred bit of scroll floated out from under Bobbledandrophous. It danced and twirled toward me, despite the absence of wind—smudged with ash but the scrawl still legible.

I Scorch-Proofed your suit so it could make it to the ball in one piece.  You’re welcome because you’ll thank me later –Verte

“I don’t have time for whatever game she thinks she’s playing. If the White One’s prison goes dark, the rest of Story will not be far behind.” Crumpling the piece of paper, I cursed that Emerald sorceress and the dozen other oracles that had come before her. All claiming to know how to keep the fires from going out. A dozen wild goose chases later, they had all turned out to be liars. Yet I had no choice but to resume the chase at the green skinned witch’s invitation. Not wanting to delay any more, I grasped the reins and pulled myself astride my mount in one fluid movement while giving him the cue to gallop off.

I could hear my retainer calling after me, his voice fading the farther away I got. “My Lord. You forgot-“

“No I didn’t,” I said to myself and shuddered. Humiliation of looking like an overgrown blumerrang bird aside, what matter did clothes have in ensuring the safety of realm. With my eye on the spiral towers of the Emerald palace, I rode hard and fast.

“In a fortnight, you must go to the Emerald palace. Not a moment before. Not a moment after,” Verte had said.

When I asked why she replied, “Because that’s when you’ll be able to find our princess and see her great worth. She has the strength to be the hero we all need.” The witch trailed off with something that sounded quite like I hope…

For the love of Grimm, just this once.

Because I didn’t know how much longer I could hope to rule a crumbling kingdom without becoming buried in the rubble.

*******

The outer battalion gates to the palace appeared unguarded, yet I felt like I was pulling ten trolls weight behind me as I forced my horse through.

Something other than men stood vigil over the entrance.

Whatever protection spell had been laid around the Emerald city was invisible to the eye, but magic always leaves a trace. If not by sight, then by smell and my nose detected the scent of burning bread. Both comforting and warning at the same time.

I made it to the other side of the enchantment with a pop, relieved to be free of the crushing pressure. A young girl with silver spun hair stood on the outside looking in, her pale hand held up, her face pinched with longing. And then she looked at me, like someone who could see water just on the other side of the desert.

I shook my head to clear it and spurred my mount forward to the palace’s stables. If she was on the outside there was likely a good reason for it to be so. In Fairytale, if you only looked with your eyes, you didn’t live to look very much longer.

Once I walked inside the palace walls, I severely hoped that principle held true. Every facet of Emerald was adorned with something gaudy and shiny which seemed to serve no purpose at all. Servants dressed as well as kings bustled about carrying more garnishments to hang here and there. Luxury and frippery as far as the eye could see. What kind of hero could possibly be born from such softness?

I strode through the palace’s marble halls, searching for why I was here in the first place. Verte’s black hat towered above the chaos, so I wound my way through the fleet of servants to the grand ballroom.

She cackled high and off key, patting my shoulder like we were old battle comrades. “Oh good, you done made it after all.”

“But for what is the question.”

“Why to woo our Princess at the Muse Day ball. You did bring it didn’t you?” Verte bobbed her head around my body searching for something that I clearly didn’t have in my empty hands. The pat turned to a solid whack upside my temple. “You ninny. You had one job. One job. And that was not to show up dressed like this! I’ll have you know that little bit of Glinda high fashion cost me my best staff.”

“Who cares?” I rubbed the side of my head.

“You will in about—“ Verte’s warning was interrupted with a loud roar that shook the floating globed chandeliers. “Pixie pus. It’s starting already. Well, good luck.” She looked me up and down before scurrying away like her broom was on fire. “You’re gonna need it.”

While I was pondering exactly what that meant, I spied a woman watching me. Intently. She was older, dressed simply, but elegantly. Far too old to be a maiden, I suspected. But I was not here for anything as useless as romance, despite what Verte said.

Walking toward me, the lady’s movement and the way she carried herself screamed her authority before she uttered a word.

The promised hero.

“You are not from here I suspect,” she said, her eyes narrowing. Unlike the witch, she didn’t look at my travel worn clothing, but stared hard into my eyes.

“I am Prince Kato, the next in line to become the King of Beasts.” It took a good deal of effort to meet that gaze and not turn away. My efforts were rewarded with a slight nod of acknowledgement. As one might give to an equal. “And you would be the Princess of Emerald.”

Her calm expression cracked for a moment when a brief trill of laughter escaped. “Once perhaps. But now that honor belongs to my daughter.” A high pitch wail stopped her from saying more. She rubbed the middle of her forehead and excused herself before storming off in the direction of the commotion.

“Dorthea Gayle Emerald! Do not take a single step outside that door.” The queen’s stern warning made my blood chill, impressive since I was part ice elemental.

I followed—at a safe and respectable distance—and found a place to observe with the gathering crowd. Servants and guests alike chattered amongst themselves as the Queen reprimanded a noble lady who had apparently misbehaved. The girl was stunning, her lips in particular seemed to be painted with rubies. A breathing work of art. Unfortunately,  those delicate lips were ruined by pouting while she whined like a petulant child.

The girl put her delicate hands together and pleaded with the queen. “Please please please please. I’ll do anything you want if you let me outside for just a little while.”

“Who is that?” I asked, grabbing the nearest servant trying to watch without being noticed.

“Best steer clear of that one. That be the cursed princess. She’ll burn ya to cinders just fer looking at her.” Too stunned, I let go without asking any follow up questions.

That was the Emerald Princess. The hero strong enough to save all of Libraria. The fire priestess my people had been waiting centuries for? The girl was throwing a tantrum because for some reason she was not allowed out to play.

There was no way this girl could help. Taking her to the Chimeras would only be a burden. The witch had lied to me. We were all doomed.

In my anger and despair, I could feel my control of the ice slip. Frost crystals formed on the green and gold stained glass windows.

Verte mouthed something from across the room and I could hear her voice in my ear as if she was standing right beside me. “I am never wrong.”

I watched the rest of the argument, searching Princess Dorthea for a hint, a glimmer of the strength and regalness her mother possessed. If it was there, it remained well hidden under mounds of jewels and silk.

So intent on finding the answer to the puzzle the witch posed, I didn’t realize the crowd had left. And that the princess was glaring at me with her little nose crinkled in disdain. “If you’re the new gardener, the hedges are overgrown and in need of a trim.” She pointed in the direction of the courtyard where a man moped about with a small net. “While you’re there, you can help the king with the wisps.”

Not used to be spoken to without respect, I didn’t move. If I had, I might have frozen her lovely curls in place.

She stamped her foot and pointed more forcefully. “Off with you. Courtyard’s that way. Be sure to clean those awful boots before coming back in.”

The deeper I looked the more shallow this girl seemed. This had been a colossal waste of time. Just another golden goose chase.  The disappointment was almost more than I could bear. “Someone told me I’d find a princess of great worth here. One with the strength to be the hero this realm needs.” I spun around and strode away, but frustrated, I couldn’t help tossing a final insult at my disappointment. “It appears she was mistaken.”

Though I continued on without catching her reaction, the satisfaction of putting her in her place did lighten my mood from frostbite to blizzard. Normally I was above such things, but something about Princess Dorthea…

The witch’s whisper still tickled my ear.

            I’m never wrong.

Now Playing on the FABLE Channel

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The Real Princesses of Storybook County

This season on The Real Princesses of Storybook County:

Aurora takes a good long look in Snow’s mirror… will she like what she sees?

Courtesy of Tori Wright
Courtesy of Tori Wright

Beauty finds true love’s kiss… but it’s not with the Beast

Courtesy CC and Morgan Crauch
Courtesy CC and Morgan Crauch

Jasmine’s had enough and takes revenge on one of her fellow castmates… but which one?

Courtesy of Vitaliy Kuptsov
Courtesy of Vitaliy Kuptsov

 

If you want to know who won’t be getting their Happy Ever After, Tune in to the Fable Channel on your telemirror set this season

SPELLED Snacks: Chocolate wands

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In Spelled, Princess Dorthea’s favorite snack is a little something called a Chocolate Wand. If you want to really get into the book, why not read and much your own wand?

There are a couple of ways to do it.

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Photo Courtesy Potter Pinterest

You can use a tube of Pillsbury breadsticks, taking apart one to roll out into a thin thread to spiral around the “wand”. Or you can mold the dough into any shape you want. Bake until crispy, then let cool.  Next melt down some chocolate in a double boiler. White chocolate, dark chocolate, milk or semi-sweet. Whatever flavor you are feeling. (If you want to get really fancy, you can dip your bread stick in caramel first) Dip 2/3 in, leaving a handle. Then add sprinkles before the chocolate dries.

Set and Voila. Thick Pretzel rods work well too.

It’s pretty easy, but if you want the feel without the work, Pocky Sticks are a sort of ready made solution. In fact I regularly chowed down on the while writing Spelled. Enjoy and if you make some wands, please tweet me a picture of the magic @BetsySchow or email me betsyschow@gmail.com

 

SPELLED Inside Scoop: Who are the Storymakers?

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When I created SPELLED, I imagined a world where every character ever written could interact with each other. A world called Libraria. My story takes place more specifically within the realm of Fairytale. When I was writing Spelled, I began to think about the culture that the inhabitants of Fairytale might have. (I’m a cultural anthropology minor–assuming I ever find time to finish my degree) How would these characters see there own lives? What sort of view of destiny would they hold? What sort of cosmology and religion?

I decided that just as I believe I was created by a God who watches over me, so too do these characters believe. Except their Almighty Power is a pantheon of “Storymakers” that determine their traits, character arcs and happy ever afters.  Like the Greeks had Zeus, the characters of Fairytale had Grimm at the head of the pantheon. There is also a host of other patron Storymakers.

Martine Leavitt teaches a writing class at LDStorymakers
Martine Leavitt teaches an intensive writing workshop at LDStorymakers

In the real world of “Kansas” and Provo, Utah, there are Storymakers everywhere. But we know that we are anything but Almighty beings. Quite often we start writing with a beautiful outline, only to have our characters hijack the story and take it into a whole new and unexpected direction.

The name “Storymakers” actually came from an author’s guild I belong to, LDStorymakers. I was so fortunate this past weekend to attend a conference with other members of the group such as James Dashner, Brandon Mull, J. Scott Savage, Jennifer Nielsen, Martine Leavitt, and hundreds more. From NYT best-selling writers to those working on their first drafts, we all came with one thing in mind. To Learn. To Grow. To Create. To Build up more characters and then let them loose to find their own fates.

Spelled is a fun romp through fairytales, but if you read closely, you’ll also feel a theme of how I interpret the world, personal accountability, and the role the divine plays in our society. I wanted people to think about whether their own “Storymaker” wrote every twist and turn of their lives or if they were ultimately responsible for their own happy ending.

PAGE PIX: Creature Feature

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Strange Creature Sighted Flying Over Sherwood: Hallucination or Invasion?

Ever since Princess Dorthea of Emerald made the wish that upended all of Story, strange occurrences and illustrations have been flooding Flitter accounts through Libraria. The most recent is the report of an unknown creature soaring through the skies with a damsel hanging from its mouth. One shopkeep made an etching of the beast that appears to have a lions body, broad feathery wings, sharp and twisted horns, as well as a whip-like dragon’s tail.

Etching used with permission of artist Heather Carr
Etching used with permission of artist Heather Carr

One Flitter user, BlackCrow76, called the beast a “Chimera”, though no record of such a creature could be found in our fact-checking. As the sketch and description don’t match any entries in the Beast’s book titled, Animal Attractions, this reporter can only surmise that the reports are another intentional hoax or mass-hystoria, similar to the frog-prince-plague last week.

If you have evidence of this “Chimera” tag us @BetsySchow and prove me wrong.

Ministry of Inter-Story Tourism: Camelost

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All Camelot Tours Cancelled Until Further Notice

Acamelostt this time M.I.S.T must regrettably place a moratorium on all Camelot visits as the castle was recently, “misplaced” -as Master Merlin puts it-  during the unfortunate wishing event.  For some inexplicable reason, however, Camelot’s reflection is still visible in the waters of Avalon. The Lady of the Lake is being investigated for the theft.

In addition to the cancellations, the official tourism board has also issued a travel warning for the area for characters of both Legend and Fairy-tale Stories. Though Master Merlfieldin had hoped to organize a search party to ascertain the current whereabouts of Excalibur, the Ministry has grave concerns that the castle may choose to reappear unexpectedly on top of any foolish enough to go searching for the sword. All crossings by horse, pegasus, and fairy godmother are expressly forbidden.

 

CASTLE SHOPPING NETWORK: Green Light Special

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Right now, for a limited time, you can feel like the Queen in this 100% authentic relic of the Emerald Dynasty, salvaged from the gemstone wreckage of the the former Palace after Griz blew it down with her storms.

Tiara_-_Empress_Tiara_7*some exclusions apply

 

 

There’s only one available, so hurry fast and use your spellphones to dial #555-CASTLE1

And if you call within the next ten minutes, we’ll throw in these Hans Christian Loubatin knock offs for no extra charge (excludes 9.99 handling fee)

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All of this can be yours for one thousand 4-star reviews. (Plus shipping and handling) Storybook Express cards are the preferred payment method of the Castle Shopping Network.

*This is the really really fine print. As if you couldn’t tell, this is a fake infomercial. You cannot have this crown cuz its in the Smithsonian or something. The shoes are actual Christian Loubatin’s that can be yours for about $700. We hope you have enjoyed this Spelled extra content and please please enjoy the book.

PAGE PIX: May the Fourth be with Ewe

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Clone War between Bo Peep and Little Girl Down the Lane

Story by Jabba the Huntsman

Photo courtesy of Shannon at Creative Coomons
Photo courtesy of Shannon at Creative Coomons

lanegirlMore fallout from the cursed wishing star incident, Wish-pocalypse caused by Princess Dorthea, hits Story residents as the top leaders in the shepherding industry have reportedly joined the Dark Side. Tensions between Bo Peep and the Little Girl Down the Lane over ethics of Black Sheep have always been high, but the absence of fairytale rules has destroyed the peace between the two parties. Reports of mass fleecings have been pouring in, as well as rumors of a full scale Clone War set to begin on May the Fourth.

A large army of Peep’s clone troopers were seen marching down the lane, with Dolly said be leading the charge. This claim could not be substantiated as white armor used on both sides makes it impossible to differentiate between the troops.  If confronted by these clones, residents are advised to wave a hand in front of the Ewes and say, “These are not dragons you’re looking for.” sheep

Ministry of Inter-Story Tourism: Travel Advisory

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Inter-Story Travel Advisory in effect for all of Libraria

 

Following the Wish-quake reportedly caused by a misfired wish (see FOX and the Hounds coverage here), the Ministry of Inter-Story Tourism has issued a travel advisory for all Libraria. The epicenter of the phenomnon seems to be the Emerald Palace, but the investigation is still ongoing. Prime Minister Goose urges calm and caution while the after wish effects are felt throughout the Fairy Tale realms .

Particular areas of concern include the Sherwood Forest, where trees have been recently reported as uprooting themselves and chasing tresspassers;tree-roots

Wondergardens has also reported strange plant behavior including rapid growth and carnivorous blossoms. This is the last known image of Red before her cape was found in tatters. WARNING: THIS PHOTO MAY BE TOO INTENSE FOR MORE SENSITIVE READERS.

Photo Courtesy of Alice Popkorn
Photo Courtesy of Alice Popkorn

All Princesses are advised to stay inside their towers and not let down their hair for anyone until the side effects have passed.